Check out these great writers and their revisions. I had chatted with them, shared some ideas, and revision happened!
Enjoy
| His first draft... |
| Now we can see his speech bubble! |
| Her first draft... |
| She added, "because I am a girly-girl." |
| He's proud... |
| His first draft... |
| Now we can see his speech bubble! |
| Her first draft... |
| She added, "because I am a girly-girl." |
| He's proud... |